Six Sentence Sunday – 19/6/11

Bite With HeightThis follows on directly from last week’s snippet of Bite With Height – I thought I’d just tease you that little bit more… 😉

For her, it was the ideal hunting ground.

At this time, just past sunset, it was always full of people, some going about their daily life, which just happened to take the crowds through one of the city’s seediest areas. Others came to stare, bug-eyed, at the voluptuous women trying to entice them into lap-dancing clubs. They giggled behind their fingers as they shuffled past shop windows advertising all manner of equipment for use in the bedroom.

Then there were stag and hen parties—groups that descended on Pigalle, spent an evening causing havoc in the bars and clubs, then left, having laughed themselves hoarse and having drunk a skinful.

Most of these people were utterly harmless.

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16 Responses to "Six Sentence Sunday – 19/6/11"

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  1. Sam Crescent

    June 19, 2011 at 1:02 pm

    You know how to tease people Lucy. Fantastic 6

  2. Heather Thurmeier

    June 19, 2011 at 1:04 pm

    Interesting setup. I wonder what’s going to happen next. Maybe next week we’ll find out!

  3. Graylin Fox

    June 19, 2011 at 1:17 pm

    I can see the bustling streets and hear the embarrassed giggles. Great job!

  4. Gem Sivad

    June 19, 2011 at 2:43 pm

    Oops, left my comment below. But, hey, it was worth two posts. Great six, Lucy.

  5. Ranae Rose

    June 19, 2011 at 2:45 pm

    Sounds like a place where just about anything could happen!

  6. sue

    June 19, 2011 at 3:10 pm

    Very visual writing

  7. Dawne Prochilo

    June 19, 2011 at 3:17 pm

    Love the premises for this scene- very intriguing

  8. Vivien Jackson

    June 19, 2011 at 6:01 pm

    Okay, I’m there. 🙂 Excellent scene-setting.

  9. Eleri Stone

    June 19, 2011 at 7:26 pm

    Great description and a nice setup. I want to know more.

  10. Jessica Knauss

    June 19, 2011 at 7:32 pm

    MOST of them are harmless… way to keep us in suspense!

  11. Sarah Grimm

    June 19, 2011 at 9:32 pm

    MOST of them are harmless, huh? Great six, Lucy!

  12. Nichelle Gregory

    June 19, 2011 at 9:44 pm

    Love the cover and the snippet, Lucy! 🙂

  13. ashlynn monroe

    June 20, 2011 at 12:35 am


  14. Jessica Subject

    June 20, 2011 at 10:54 am

    “Most of these people…” except for maybe her. Great setup!

  15. Cassandra Carr

    June 20, 2011 at 9:30 pm

    Not all of them are totally harmless! I love it!

  16. JoAnne Kenrick

    June 20, 2011 at 11:49 pm

    love the set up, Lucy! Fantastic imagery and sense of the area she’s in.