Six Sentence Sunday – 11/12/11

Susie White and the Right Hand ManHere are six sentences from my upcoming fairy tale retelling Susie White and the Right Hand Man, from House of Erotica. Chris Hemsworth fans will appreciate this one 😉

I should have known my stepmother was up to something when she offered to help me move all my stuff to my University digs. It wasn’t like her to be civil, much less helpful, but I figured that she was happy I was moving hundreds of miles away, and therefore would do anything to make sure it happened as quickly as possible.

As my father’s only child, I’m the sole heir to White’s Bites, a massively profitable confectionary company based in Wiltshire, England. My stepmother had made no secret of the fact she resented that she wouldn’t get a stake in the business, should anything happen to my father. Of course, the reason for this was that my father knew the first thing the witch would do was put the business on the market to get her greedy little hands on the cash. I, on the other hand, loved White’s Bites and would continue to run it to the best of my ability.

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14 Responses to "Six Sentence Sunday – 11/12/11"

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  1. Alix

    December 11, 2011 at 10:09 am

    Great introduction to the characters, I’m involved already. Great six!

  2. Jessica Subject

    December 11, 2011 at 12:44 pm

    Great insight! Makes me want to

  3. kerrianne

    December 11, 2011 at 2:54 pm

    Good, interesting six

  4. Cara McKenna

    December 11, 2011 at 4:16 pm

    Nice. Great set up of the conflict.

  5. Dee Carney

    December 11, 2011 at 4:43 pm

    I love, love, love fairy tale retellings!! Can’t wait to read this one!

  6. Dakota Trace

    December 11, 2011 at 5:18 pm

    Wow – love the set up here. You have everything including the wicked set up to snag the reader’s attention. Great six. Look forward to seeing more of this story.

  7. Gemma Parkes

    December 11, 2011 at 6:11 pm

    Great snippet Lucy, pulled me right in!

  8. Angela Guillaume

    December 11, 2011 at 8:23 pm

    You had me at Chris Hemsworth…as he’s the inspiration for my hero in my most recent WIP. Great minds, eh? I’m definitely intrigued…

  9. jayel kaye

    December 11, 2011 at 9:09 pm

    white bites. Great name. Loved the 6

  10. Melissa MacKinnon

    December 12, 2011 at 12:05 am

    Great six, I want to know more!

  11. Krystal Wade

    December 12, 2011 at 3:37 am

    I sense a war coming on. 🙂

  12. Liia Ann White

    December 12, 2011 at 12:12 pm

    Oh this cover 😉
    I’ve got this story sitting on my Kindle, just waiting for me to get time to read it! I think I might stare at the cover for a while first hehe

  13. Sarah Ballance

    December 12, 2011 at 2:32 pm

    Oh, I sooo want to know what she’s up to! Great six, Lucy!

  14. Naomi

    December 12, 2011 at 4:52 pm

    Oh thats a real hook. I want to know more