Six Sentence Sunday – 12/2/12

Susie White and the Right Hand ManLast piece from from fairy tale retelling Susie White and the Right Hand Man, then I’ll move onto something new next time. Happy Valentines Week! 😀

I never bothered my father with my concerns. After all, as long as she liked him, what did it matter?

While Louise and my father were just dating, things weren’t too bad. They went to restaurants, the theatre, the cinema, and so on. I didn’t see her very often, and therefore didn’t have to put up with her frosty behaviour towards me.

Naturally, everything changed when dad told me he was going to ask Louise to marry him.

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16 Responses to "Six Sentence Sunday – 12/2/12"

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  1. Jessica Subject

    February 12, 2012 at 12:48 pm

    This six is such a tease! 🙂

  2. Evelyn Rae

    February 12, 2012 at 2:59 pm

    Oh no! Disrupting the status quo! I bet the tension between Louise and the narrator will be absolutely delicious.

  3. D L Jackson

    February 12, 2012 at 3:06 pm

    I definately get the whole fairy tale vibe, evil step-mother and all. Nice show, Lucy.
    Thanks for sharing.

  4. Carly Fall

    February 12, 2012 at 4:00 pm

    Ah, the frosty step mother! Very nice six!

  5. Dakota Trace

    February 12, 2012 at 4:15 pm

    Hmmm, seems like her happy little world is going to be turned upside down. Great six

  6. Jessica Knauss

    February 12, 2012 at 4:41 pm

    Great development of the evil stepmother! Very nice six.

  7. Graylin Fox

    February 12, 2012 at 5:03 pm

    Yikes. She’s going to need a defrost setting!

  8. Gayle Ramage

    February 12, 2012 at 5:29 pm

    Uh-oh, bad times ahead, I think! Fab snippet!

  9. Skye Warren

    February 12, 2012 at 8:25 pm

    Ooh, nice last line. Did not see it coming 🙂

  10. Alix Cameron

    February 12, 2012 at 8:45 pm

    Wonderfully written!

  11. DeAnna Felthauser

    February 12, 2012 at 9:20 pm

    Evil stepmother! Great snippet 🙂

  12. Nick Kelly

    February 12, 2012 at 9:37 pm

    Wow, flipping the “no one is good enough for my daughter” argument on its head. I dig it.

  13. A.K. Morgen

    February 12, 2012 at 10:48 pm

    Yikes. I see trouble ahead. Great six, Lucy!

  14. Gemma Parkes

    February 12, 2012 at 10:59 pm

    Great tension building here! looking forward to reading more!

  15. Ginger Simpson

    February 13, 2012 at 12:14 am

    Can’t wait to see what happens when she becomes his stepmom. 🙂 Way to make the reader anticipate.

  16. E. Jamie

    February 13, 2012 at 4:43 am

    Great six!