Six Sentence Sunday – 27/2/11

Here’s a snippet from Succubus Comes Home which is to featured in the upcoming Cleis Press anthology, Dream Lover. It’s due for release in May.

In fact it wasn’t just his eyes that were pretty; the guy was out and out gorgeous. He was tall, six feet and then some, she guessed, with a light brown crop of hair and a smile that would send most mortal females weak at the knees. He wore tight but faded jeans and beat-up leather jacket over a white t-shirt. A sneaky glance in the direction of his feet (come on, what self-respecting girl doesn’t check out a guy’s footwear?) revealed a sturdy pair of Caterpillar boots. Mmm… sexy. She loved a guy that looked rough and ready for anything.

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  5. Dee Carney

    February 27, 2011 at 4:43 pm

    LOL. So cracking me up with the footwear comment!

  6. Cindy L

    February 27, 2011 at 4:50 pm

    Great description Lucy! He sounds yummy!

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  7. Gem Sivad

    February 27, 2011 at 5:05 pm

    Oh so do I–love a guy who looks rough and ready! rawrrr. Great six!

    gem

  8. Rebecca Royce

    February 27, 2011 at 5:06 pm

    I love her!! She just made me laugh aloud. Great work.

  9. Lisa Fox

    February 27, 2011 at 5:10 pm

    Mmm… sexy indeed!

  10. Paranormal Opinion

    February 27, 2011 at 6:04 pm

    I love the footwear part! This sounds like a great book – I’d love to read it.

  11. Christa Paige

    February 27, 2011 at 6:11 pm

    Oh boy he sounds delicious! I’d be looking, too. Great Six Sentences. Makes me want to check out that anthology.

  12. Cate Masters

    February 27, 2011 at 6:17 pm

    She’s very discerning for a succubus, lol. The “mortal females” comment made me wonder how his smile affected her. Hope to read more of this!

  13. Casi

    February 27, 2011 at 6:51 pm

    He sounds really yummy, and I like her attitude. However, I must admit that I don’t look at guys shoes.

  14. Jessica Subject

    February 27, 2011 at 7:14 pm

    I’m likin’ rough and ready too! 😉

  15. Marie Dees

    February 27, 2011 at 7:18 pm

    Rough and ready!

  16. JoAnne Kenrick

    February 27, 2011 at 7:21 pm

    LMAo at the footwear comment! I’m so with her, I too love a rough and ready (for anything) kinda guy!

  17. Pippa Jay

    February 27, 2011 at 7:33 pm

    I liked the sound of his smile and those ‘pretty eyes.’ 🙂

  18. Joder

    February 27, 2011 at 7:54 pm

    Very sexy man that has me drooling.

    joderjo402 AT gmail DOT com

  19. Trish McCallan

    February 27, 2011 at 7:57 pm

    Yum, he sounds good enough to lick. . . all over. The leather jacket over a white t shirt cinched it for me.
    Great Six, as usual.

  20. Lauri J Owen

    February 27, 2011 at 8:13 pm

    What a great description!

  21. Taryn Kincaid

    February 27, 2011 at 8:16 pm

    As long as he’s ready…rough, gorgeous, smokin’ smile, cool kicks…that’s all gravy!

  22. Cathy M

    February 27, 2011 at 8:18 pm

    What a great description, totally hot and sexy.

  23. Lex Valentine

    February 27, 2011 at 9:28 pm

    I’m with Dee, the shoes remark was pretty funny.

  24. Emily Cale

    February 27, 2011 at 11:38 pm

    Oooo… I also like guys who are rough and ready for anything. If you have any leftover, send them my way!

  25. Seleste deLaney

    February 28, 2011 at 12:09 am

    Nice voice in this 🙂 Not sure I’ve ever checked out a guy’s shoes unless they looked particularly ragged at a glance, but then again, I’ve never claimed to be a normal girl LOL.

  26. Darcy Drake

    February 28, 2011 at 1:11 am

    Jeans and a white tshirt are the best menswear combination of all time! Loved the six. =D

  27. Eve Cassidy

    February 28, 2011 at 5:11 am

    Totally agree! I’m ready for the rough and tumble types.

  28. Angela S Stone

    February 28, 2011 at 5:34 am

    Hee! She’s totally right! What self-respecting woman doesn’t check out the foot wear! (and then the ring finger!! lol!)

    xx
    Angela

  29. Lynne Murray

    February 28, 2011 at 6:30 am

    Hot six!

  30. Graylin Fox

    February 28, 2011 at 3:37 pm

    Hi, my name is Graylin and I check out men’s shoes. Great snippet!

  31. Miranda Buchanan

    February 28, 2011 at 5:54 pm

    LOL yes rough and ready for anything! Nice job. 🙂

  32. Hailey Edwards

    February 28, 2011 at 7:51 pm

    LOL Very cute. Really like the voice in this piece.

  33. dianne hartsock

    March 1, 2011 at 4:44 am

    Pretty eyes. I like that. 🙂

  34. Joleene Naylor

    March 1, 2011 at 7:22 am

    Sounds tasty to me!! 😀