Six Sentence Sunday – 29/1/12

Susie White and the Right Hand ManMore from fairy tale retelling Susie White and the Right Hand Man.

I’d been eager to get on with the woman, knowing it would please my father. “Everyone does.”

Another tight-lipped smile. I’d tried hard to make conversation with her and make her feel comfortable in our home. But I never felt like I was succeeding. At first, I put it down to her being nervous or shy, but as weeks and months passed, I still never felt as though Louise warmed to me.

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9 Responses to "Six Sentence Sunday – 29/1/12"

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  1. Eleri Stone

    January 29, 2012 at 2:35 pm

    Ouch. She sound pretty cold.

  2. Zee Monodee

    January 29, 2012 at 3:52 pm

    Evil stepmum, all right!

  3. Skye Warren

    January 29, 2012 at 3:59 pm

    I know! Poor guy, sounds like he’s working hard and not making much headway. Here’s hoping he has a breakthrough soon.

  4. Krystal Wade

    January 29, 2012 at 4:44 pm

    I think it’s cause she likes him! 😉

  5. Alix

    January 29, 2012 at 4:58 pm

    Great snippet.

  6. Jessica Subject

    January 29, 2012 at 8:06 pm

    Must be a very tense household. I couldn’t imagine living like that. A great six! 🙂

  7. Sharita Lira

    January 29, 2012 at 9:37 pm

    Great six Lucy!


  8. Jessica Knauss

    January 30, 2012 at 12:27 am

    Awfully uncomfortable for them, but great for us to read about!

  9. dianne hartsock

    January 30, 2012 at 12:28 am

    Oh, I feel bad for him. That’s a tough situation to be in.