Six Sentence Sunday – 13/3/11

Here’s a little snippet from my story Sofa, So Fun, which is to be featured in Xcite Books’ Best of Both erotic anthology, due for release in May.

He was standing in the darkness at the bottom of the stairs. And who knew how long he’d been there.

By now Kristin had realised something was wrong, and followed Shayna’s horrified gaze to the shadows at the bottom of the stairs. Before either girl had chance to react, Dan moved forward out of the darkness.

“Nice show, ladies. Don’t let me stop you.”


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29 Responses to "Six Sentence Sunday – 13/3/11"

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  2. Dawne Prochilo

    March 13, 2011 at 10:31 am

    Yummy Lucy…voyeur? Future participant? Either way- delicious SSS

  3. Jessica Subject

    March 13, 2011 at 11:20 am

    Sound ominous. I wonder how Dan will contribute to the story.

  4. Gem Sivad

    March 13, 2011 at 12:30 pm

    I have a feeling Dan intends to become a participant. I definitely will be back to find out.

    Great six!

    gem

  5. Graylin Fox

    March 13, 2011 at 1:27 pm

    I agree with Gem, sounds like he plans to join the party.

    Great Six.

  6. Sarah Grimm

    March 13, 2011 at 2:04 pm

    Of course he waited until they spotted him. *grin* Can’t wait to read more.

  7. Liia Ann White

    March 13, 2011 at 2:19 pm

    Can’t wait to see what happens next

  8. Sandi Sookoo

    March 13, 2011 at 2:22 pm

    Interesting, but what happens next? 🙂

  9. Vivien Jackson

    March 13, 2011 at 4:34 pm

    I got some ideas of what he saw. Fun voyeur goodness!

  10. Stacey Kennedy

    March 13, 2011 at 4:46 pm

    ooo…he watched! LOVE THAT!!

  11. Laura Kaye

    March 13, 2011 at 4:51 pm

    Love the tension leading up to his smug dialogue!

  12. Hailey Edwards

    March 13, 2011 at 5:16 pm

    I wonder what he thinks will happen next? lol

  13. Jessica

    March 13, 2011 at 5:50 pm

    Naughty boy.

  14. J.C. Martin

    March 13, 2011 at 5:54 pm

    Have we a peeping Tom in our midst? Or a threesome possibility? 🙂 Great 6, although I noticed “bottom of the stairs” appeared twice in the six sentences, and that made me stumble a bit.

  15. Roberta

    March 13, 2011 at 6:09 pm

    A Voyeur?! Hot!

  16. Jay Di Meo

    March 13, 2011 at 7:00 pm

    Sounds fascinating. Great six!

  17. Taryn Kincaid

    March 13, 2011 at 7:20 pm

    Get the impression Dan not only won’t stop them, but they’ll invite him to join their party…or he’ll crash it without waiting for an engraved invitation!

  18. Cate Masters

    March 13, 2011 at 7:58 pm

    Fun snippet. Hope to read more!

  19. erastes

    March 13, 2011 at 8:16 pm

    Teasing snippet!

  20. Lisa Fox

    March 13, 2011 at 8:54 pm

    Ooo, that’s naughty! I love it!

  21. Lauri J Owen

    March 13, 2011 at 8:58 pm

    LOL! Great setup! Can’t wait to hear what happens next!

  22. Liz

    March 13, 2011 at 9:51 pm

    ooooo- what were they doing??????? Nice six!

  23. Savannah Chase

    March 13, 2011 at 9:59 pm

    Ohh I want more.

  24. Lynne Murray

    March 13, 2011 at 10:42 pm

    Great six, must turn page to find out what happens next!

  25. J. Rose Allister

    March 13, 2011 at 11:36 pm

    I couldn’t decide at first whether it was dangerous, ominous tension or dangerous, PROMISING tension…by the end I knew, and want to know what happens!

  26. roseanne dowell

    March 14, 2011 at 12:15 am

    Wow, great six.

  27. andrea

    March 14, 2011 at 7:22 am

    I liked it!

  28. Pippa Jay

    March 14, 2011 at 10:54 am

    I’m not sure whether to worry for them or envy them?!

  29. Keri Ford

    March 15, 2011 at 1:44 pm

    Very intense! nice