Six Sentence Sunday – 3/4/11

I’m working on a couple of WIPs at the moment and this is a random six from my unfinished, unedited, untitled erotic romance tale, so please be gentle! 🙂

When the name popped into her Facebook friend requests, Scarlet nearly threw up. It was a name she’d thought about a lot over the years, mainly in a hateful ‘I wish he’d drop dead’ fashion. But, as the saying goes, there’s a fine line between love and hate.

And once upon a time, Scarlet had been madly, passionately, sickeningly in love with Charlie Warren. It was the kind of love that only teenagers have; where the slightest disagreement means it’s all over and so, consequently, is your life.

Charlie had been her first love, in every sense of the word.


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30 Responses to "Six Sentence Sunday – 3/4/11"

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  1. Jessica Subject

    April 3, 2011 at 12:23 pm

    I remember those years and that boy. Don’t care to go back. Great six! 🙂

  2. Liia Ann White

    April 3, 2011 at 1:24 pm

    oh I know how that goes! Can’t wait to see what happens.

  3. JoAnne Kenrick

    April 3, 2011 at 2:19 pm

    Oh… a Facebook romance! Yeay! And… I know just how she feels, I got a similar friend request from what could be considered my first love…only there is no fine line between love and hate with him. Purely the later, now. hehe

    Looking forward to see where this goes 🙂 Fab six!

  4. Sarah Grimm

    April 3, 2011 at 3:27 pm

    Wow, I remember that boy. Funny thing is, he’s one of my facebook friends.

  5. Jessica

    April 3, 2011 at 5:04 pm

    Oh, first love. I fell sick just remembering.

  6. sue

    April 3, 2011 at 5:20 pm

    you described the feelings very well and acturately

  7. Stacey Espino

    April 3, 2011 at 5:29 pm

    Certainly piqued my interest 😉

  8. Marie Dees

    April 3, 2011 at 5:37 pm

    LOL, I can just imagine some names from the past popping up on facebook.

  9. Sandi Sookoo

    April 3, 2011 at 6:48 pm

    I’m with Jessica. Wouldn’t want to go back, but nice 6!

  10. Marsha A. Moore

    April 3, 2011 at 7:39 pm

    You have a wonderful voice, which clearly helps with characterization. Scarlett seems very interesting!

  11. Cate Masters

    April 3, 2011 at 7:42 pm

    Wonderfully evocative! Loved this, and the FB setting. Brought a chuckle.

  12. Jessica Knauss

    April 3, 2011 at 7:51 pm

    Wow, I can clearly picture how I would feel in that situation! I hope she blocks him and flags him, ha ha!

  13. Dee Carney

    April 3, 2011 at 8:39 pm

    Aww. Every woman has one of those I think.

  14. Lauri J Owen

    April 3, 2011 at 9:55 pm

    Oh – poor Scarlet! Hope it’s better than she thinks it will be!

  15. dianne hartsock

    April 3, 2011 at 11:41 pm

    First loves are always the hardest to forget, poor thing.

  16. Susanna Fraser

    April 4, 2011 at 12:07 am

    Heh, I discovered on Facebook that MY main high school crush is now a big mucky-muck in my hometown branch of the major political party I always vote AGAINST. I’m sure Scarlet’s discoveries will be much more interesting. 🙂

  17. Catriana Sommers

    April 4, 2011 at 12:18 am

    Oh gosh, I can definitely relate to this! LOL, awesome six ?

  18. Gem Sivad

    April 4, 2011 at 1:55 am

    I can so relate to this because you set it up so well. Great six!

  19. Layna Pimentel

    April 4, 2011 at 2:26 am

    Man, I think we’ve all had one of those. Great set up!

  20. Liana

    April 4, 2011 at 2:52 am

    Nice set up. There’s so much chaos you can start with this.

  21. Emily Cale

    April 4, 2011 at 4:01 am

    Love the last sentence. Can’t wait to see where this goes.

  22. kerrianne

    April 4, 2011 at 9:34 am

    Aww. Some feelings never die.

  23. Pippa Jay

    April 4, 2011 at 10:43 am

    I could imagine how she felt. And remember those days.

  24. Kathleen Grieve

    April 4, 2011 at 2:25 pm

    Wow! Charlie left quite the impression on her even after all this time…I’m sure she’s propbably hoping he is now balding and has a paunch! LOL…

  25. bluerose

    April 4, 2011 at 10:59 pm

    LOL – relating to this! enjoyed your 6!

  26. Roberta

    April 5, 2011 at 1:45 am

    This is great! Humor and angst and trepidation all rolled into 6 little sentences!

  27. Jean Davis

    April 5, 2011 at 2:04 am

    Brings back memories from my early teen years. Good emotions conveyed here!

  28. Eleri Stone

    April 5, 2011 at 4:03 am

    Great setup! Can’t wait to see where it goes.

  29. Lorien Velez

    April 5, 2011 at 6:54 am

    Love it! Some memories are hard to let go. 🙂

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