Hump Day Hook No. 1 #HDH

humpdayhookHi everyone! This is my first Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. So, I’m going to post my first hook from my recently published kinky lesbian tale, The Sweetest Revenge:

Abigail herself could be at Reception in under a minute from her desk, and would gladly be, if her presence was requested by the goddess Mackenzie. All she would have to do was click her fingers and Abigail would come running. And not just for a parcel. For whatever reason she damn well felt like giving.

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16 Responses to "Hump Day Hook No. 1 #HDH"

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  1. Paloma Beck

    February 13, 2013 at 2:09 pm

    I dare say I wouldn’t mind being her. Great hook!

  2. Jessie Lansdel

    February 13, 2013 at 3:02 pm

    Ooh, now that’s power for you. Great hook. ????

  3. Lacie Nation

    February 13, 2013 at 3:56 pm

    Nice hook.

  4. Jessica Subject

    February 13, 2013 at 4:21 pm

    Abigail is putty in her hands. Great hook! 🙂

  5. Adriana Kraft

    February 13, 2013 at 4:31 pm

    OOoo, I love it when there’s a goddess involved…great hook!


  6. Colette Saucier

    February 13, 2013 at 4:55 pm

    Heehee…. I read the hook without reading the set-up and thought, hmmmm….for sex maybe???
    Yep! 😉

  7. Flossie Benton Rogers

    February 13, 2013 at 5:22 pm

    I see who has the power in this couple, very interesting. I want to know more about them for sure.

  8. Gayle Ramage

    February 13, 2013 at 5:27 pm

    Ooh, I wonder if she’s a real goddess or just what Abigail sees her as. Great hook!

  9. Chantal Halpin

    February 13, 2013 at 6:29 pm

    I wonder what those reasons might be!

  10. Sandra Sookoo

    February 13, 2013 at 6:47 pm

    Talk about power! Great hook!

  11. Elin Gregory

    February 13, 2013 at 9:15 pm

    The snapping fingers of power!! 🙂 Grand snippet.

  12. Frank Fisher

    February 14, 2013 at 3:14 am

    Sounds like she’s got Abigail hooked (as well as me). Nice snippet.

  13. Kerrianne Coombes

    February 14, 2013 at 8:21 am

    Nice hook!

  14. Gem Sivad

    February 14, 2013 at 2:48 pm

    A case of wish and command 😉

  15. Delena Silverfox

    February 15, 2013 at 8:58 pm

    Welcome to the hump! lol Glad to read a new Hooker!

    Man, oh man, I’d love to be Mackenzie, for that kind of devotion!

  16. Naomi

    February 18, 2013 at 1:08 pm

    Ooh I’m hooked. I so want to know more