Hump Day Hook No. 12 #HDH

humpdayhookHi everyone and welcome to Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. This week, I’m sharing a snippet from my story The Wrong End of the Stick, which appears in the newly released erotic anthology, Coming Together with Curves.

Bonnie stifled a sigh. He was doing it again. Staring at her, as he had been every day that week. She was on a fortnight’s training course through work. She was the only one from her office who’d been sent. As a result, she knew no one and ended up sitting alone in the college’s cafeteria at lunchtimes. She’d had a couple of invites from kindly people also on her course, but she’d turned them down. It wasn’t that she was being rude or anti-social, she just hated people to see her eat. She was a big girl—that was putting it politely—and when people saw her eat, she could feel the judgment rolling off them in waves, the thoughts that she was fat because she ate so much.

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8 Responses to "Hump Day Hook No. 12 #HDH"

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  1. Naomi

    May 8, 2013 at 12:41 pm

    Oh yes! Definitely want more. I’m hooked!

  2. Alexandra Anthony

    May 8, 2013 at 3:34 pm

    Why is he staring again? I’m hooked!

  3. Flossie Benton Rogers

    May 8, 2013 at 5:58 pm

    Ooh, I hope he is attracted to her and she just can’t see it through her sensitivity!

  4. Elin Gregory

    May 8, 2013 at 6:44 pm

    Lovely! I like stories about ‘real shaped’ women.

  5. Jessica Subject

    May 8, 2013 at 7:10 pm

    Yes, but why is he staring at her? I NEED to know! Fabulous hook!

  6. Jessie Lansdel

    May 8, 2013 at 9:49 pm

    Very nice hook, and thank goodness a woman who isn’t so-called perfect. Nicely curvaceous perhaps. Thank you. ????

  7. Cassandra Dean

    May 9, 2013 at 12:05 pm

    Ohhh, great hook! Can’t wait to read more 🙂

  8. Rosalind Smith-Nazilli

    May 9, 2013 at 5:56 pm

    Oh yes.. I want to know more..