Hump Day Hook No. 18 #HDH

humpdayhookHi everyone and welcome to Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. This week, I’m sharing a snippet from my story, Not Just Desserts, which appears in the fabulous Smut for Chocoholics anthology.

Hilary left the pub feeling downcast. It was the second time she’d been in that week—dressed to the nines—and still he’d barely noticed her. Aside from cleaning her table when all the waiting-on staff were busy, and saying “Thanks! Good night” as she left, he’d paid her little attention. It was clear that her tight clothes, bold eye contact and wicked smiles were not getting through to him. Despite her best efforts, he still saw her as just another customer. It spoke volumes for his commendable professional attitude, but showed that his sex radar was way off. She’d been making it blatantly obvious she fancied him for months, and yet… nothing.

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6 Responses to "Hump Day Hook No. 18 #HDH"

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  1. Jessica Subject

    July 3, 2013 at 2:03 pm

    Great hook! Makes me want to know why he’s giving her the cold shoulder. I can think of many reasons.

  2. Cathy Brockman

    July 3, 2013 at 6:48 pm

    hmm intriguing. Makes me wonder why too could be so many things… Cant wait to see.

  3. Sue

    July 3, 2013 at 9:32 pm

    I want to know more. Perhaps she’ll have to be more aggressive..

  4. Stevie Carroll

    July 3, 2013 at 9:54 pm

    I like that one a lot.

    Great hook.

  5. Sandra Sookoo

    July 3, 2013 at 11:08 pm

    Hmm, wonder what’s going on with him that he’s ignoring her. Nice job!

  6. Thea

    July 3, 2013 at 11:41 pm

    Aww, I hope he notices her soon!