Hump Day Hook No. 2 #HDH

humpdayhookHi everyone and welcome to Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. This week, I’m sharing a snippet from my erotic romance story, Loose Ends:

I zoned out of Jenny’s inane chatter and stared into the middle distance. Suddenly, something moved into my line of sight that snapped me back into the land of the living. Or should I say someone.


“Fuck!” I exclaimed, gaining a disapproving look from Mrs. Busybody and puzzled ones from the girls.


“He’s fucking here!”

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16 Responses to "Hump Day Hook No. 2 #HDH"

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  1. Kathleen Grieve

    February 20, 2013 at 10:29 am

    Who? Who? So not fair!

  2. Christina Cole

    February 20, 2013 at 10:57 am

    Good hook!

  3. Sherry Gloag

    February 20, 2013 at 11:46 am

    Well 🙂 You’ve hooked me with this one.

  4. Lacie Nation

    February 20, 2013 at 11:46 am

    Well way to leave me hanging! Nice hook.

  5. Sarah Cass

    February 20, 2013 at 2:08 pm

    Makes me want to know who’s there that could have elicited such a reaction!! Nice hook.

  6. Angelica Dawson

    February 20, 2013 at 3:37 pm

    That’s how to hook a reader. Who is it? Why does it bother her?

  7. Jessica Subject

    February 20, 2013 at 4:01 pm

    Who is it! Eek! Great hook! I’m pretty sure I already have this story on my Kindle. 🙂

  8. Alexandra Anthony

    February 20, 2013 at 4:15 pm

    Great hook! Wow…I want to know who she saw.

  9. Flossie Benton Rogers

    February 20, 2013 at 5:02 pm

    That would definitely snap her back to the land of the living. Now– what is he doing there??!

  10. C.R. Moss

    February 20, 2013 at 5:43 pm

    Great hook! Wondering who’s there! 🙂

  11. Jade Crystal

    February 20, 2013 at 7:11 pm

    Well, now, that just grabbed me attention. What in all the worlds could have elicited such a response? Great hook.

  12. Elin Gregory

    February 20, 2013 at 7:47 pm

    Who’s fucking here? 🙂 Great hook.

  13. Ciaran Dwynvil

    February 20, 2013 at 8:43 pm

    Who is there? We all need to know 🙂 Great hook!

  14. meryvamp

    February 20, 2013 at 10:04 pm

    Yes, I want to know who! And why does she sound so angry about it? I want more! Great job.

  15. Catherine Green

    February 20, 2013 at 11:13 pm

    Who’s here? That was short, snappy and I’m hooked!

  16. Sabrina Devonshire

    February 20, 2013 at 11:29 pm

    The guy must either be damn good looking or they have some kind of history for her to react this strongly!