Hump Day Hook No. 20 #HDH

humpdayhookHi everyone and welcome to Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. This week, I’m sharing another snippet from my femdom erotic romance novella, Testing Tomwhich is released on 30th July with Secret Cravings Publishing.

As it happened, it wasn’t a salesperson. She ducked back from the window, clenched her hands into fists.

“What the fuck is he doing here?”

He was literally the last person she’d expected to see standing at her door. Prince William or George Clooney would have been less of a shock.

For there, outside her house, stood the man that had broken her heart several months ago. Thomas Black. She hadn’t seen hide nor hair of him since, and now, totally out of the blue, he’d turned up.

Katrina contemplated ignoring him, going back to her show and pretending she wasn’t in. But apparently that wasn’t an option.

“I know you’re there, Katrina,” he yelled through the letterbox, “your car is on the drive, and I can see the glow of the telly through the curtains.”

Katrina decided it was time to get thicker curtains. Not wanting to cause a scene, which her nosey neighbors would no doubt adore, she moved to the front door, unlocked it and flung it open.

“Get in,” she said, quickly closing the door behind him, then turning to face her unwanted visitor. “What the hell do you want?”

He held his hands up in supplication, then spoke. “Look, I know I’m probably the last person you expected to see—wanted to see—but I have to talk to you. Please?”

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5 Responses to "Hump Day Hook No. 20 #HDH"

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  1. Lacie Nation

    July 17, 2013 at 12:39 pm

    Great hook. Love the description.

  2. Alexandra Anthony

    July 17, 2013 at 2:55 pm

    Loved the hook!

  3. Jessica Subject

    July 17, 2013 at 4:20 pm

    Great hook! I want to know what he wants, too. 🙂

  4. Sandra Sookoo

    July 17, 2013 at 7:59 pm

    Compelling hook!

  5. Ellen Cross

    July 21, 2013 at 1:19 pm

    I am intrigued by what has him at her door like this. Awesome hook!