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Hump Day Hook No. 3 #HDH

humpdayhookHi everyone and welcome to Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. This week, I’m sharing a snippet from my erotic story, A Taste of London:

Rolling out of bed and shambling toward his friend’s, Ryan resisted the temptation to punch him. It wasn’t Kristian’s fault his phone was ringing, after all. Though the twat could have put it on silent before bed like most normal people. Sniggering, Ryan realized Kristian had been too drunk to fully undress, let alone operate his phone. He shook him awake while trying to find the offending mobile in the tangle of Kristian’s sheets. He found it and as soon as Kristian sat up he shoved it into his hand.

 

“Wh-who is it?” Kristian asked dopily, peering at the screen.

 

“I don’t know,” Ryan whispered, “just answer it and get outside—the noise is disturbing everyone else.”

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16 Responses to "Hump Day Hook No. 3 #HDH"

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  1. Kerrianne Coombes

    February 27, 2013 at 9:37 am

    LOL Nothing more annoying than being woken up by a phone–especially when you are hung over x Nicely done

  2. Jessie Lansdel

    February 27, 2013 at 11:37 am

    Oh dear….I always forget to put mine on silent. And the alarm is a pain. Great hook. Thank you. ????

  3. Jessica Subject

    February 27, 2013 at 1:00 pm

    Yes, who is it? And why so early? Great hook!

  4. Lacie Nation

    February 27, 2013 at 1:57 pm

    Nice hook.

  5. Naomi

    February 27, 2013 at 2:05 pm

    Ooh, somebody has got a sore head lol. Great hook

  6. Angelica Dawson

    February 27, 2013 at 2:12 pm

    This hasn’t hooked me yet. I think I’d need to be pulled into why they are visiting and why they got drunk, something with more emotion. Irritation doesn’t draw me in so well…

  7. Alexandra Anthony

    February 27, 2013 at 4:24 pm

    Nice hook!

  8. Shelley Lieber

    February 27, 2013 at 7:43 pm

    When I’m in a deep sleep like that, the rings, bells, whistles all become part of the dream. No wonder he didn’t wake up!

  9. Ciaran Dwynvil

    February 27, 2013 at 7:45 pm

    lol, the morning after a hard night. A lovely description of the mood

  10. Sandra Sookoo

    February 27, 2013 at 7:51 pm

    lol nicely done, capturing the mood. 🙂

  11. Sherry Gloag

    February 27, 2013 at 8:05 pm

    Oh my, I want to know what on earth is going on. Nice hok.

  12. Elin Gregory

    February 27, 2013 at 8:21 pm

    Oh nothing worse than not being able to find a bleeping phone. Lovely snippet.

  13. Gem Sivad

    February 27, 2013 at 9:23 pm

    Yes, all the above. I’m guilty and winced at the scene having done similar. Great hook!

  14. Mandy Earles

    February 27, 2013 at 11:27 pm

    So relatable. “To drunk to operate his phone.” This is me! I’ve lost my friends while out drinking and never once thought, oh, I should just use my phone and text them. Nope. I was too drunk and wandered around aimlessly until I found them, lol. And nothing is worse than having a hangover and someone’s alarm goes off or keeps ringing. I love how snappish he is.

  15. Taryn Kincaid

    February 28, 2013 at 12:14 pm

    At least they weren’t in a movie theater! Nothing more annoying than that! Good hook!

  16. Kathleen Grieve

    March 1, 2013 at 11:58 am

    Everyone else? Must’ve been some night! Great hook!