Hump Day Hook No. 8 #HDH

humpdayhookHi everyone and welcome to Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. This week, I’m sharing a snippet from my BDSM mini-anthology, The Perfect Dom.

“Spank me. Is that an invitation?”

Shit. Mia had completely forgotten about him. Her flatmate, Katy, had asked if it was okay if her brother could stay on their sofa for a couple of nights. His own place was being fitted with a new bathroom and conditions over there weren’t exactly tantamount to hygiene. Mia had been rushing around in order to get to work and hadn’t really been paying attention, so she’d just agreed and then promptly forgotten.

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14 Responses to "Hump Day Hook No. 8 #HDH"

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  2. Jessica Subject

    April 3, 2013 at 12:49 pm

    LOL Sounds like an interesting situation. I wonder how the rest of his stay is going to go. Fabulous hook! 🙂

  3. Jessie Lansdel

    April 3, 2013 at 1:03 pm

    Oops! Very nice hook. I wonder what happens next. ????

  4. Sarah Cass

    April 3, 2013 at 2:15 pm

    Oh dear…sounds like a very wicked brother…I can only imagine where it’s going to lead. Definitely want to see more, great hook!

  5. Kerrianne Coombes

    April 3, 2013 at 6:19 pm

    Nice hook. Intrigued by the whole situation x

  6. Lilly VanHorn

    April 3, 2013 at 6:41 pm

    Curious, I’d love to read the few paragraphs prior to this to get a feel for what’s going on. I’m intrigued though!

  7. C.R. Moss

    April 3, 2013 at 7:29 pm

    Interesting. Wonder what’s going to happen between the two of them and if the invitation will be honored. Thanks for sharing. 🙂 C.R.

  8. Adriana Kraft

    April 3, 2013 at 9:27 pm

    I love how this is shaping up – great hook!

  9. Molly Daniels

    April 3, 2013 at 10:29 pm

    LOL….I think this is already on my TBB list:) If not, I’m adding it!

  10. Sandra Sookoo

    April 4, 2013 at 12:50 pm

    Nice! Can’t wait to see what happens 🙂

  11. Flossie Benton Rogers

    April 4, 2013 at 8:22 pm

    An intriguing turn of events! Well done.

  12. Mandy Earles

    April 4, 2013 at 9:15 pm

    Woa, her roommate’s brother… that sounds like a dangerous situation. Or more like a forbidden area 😉 I definitely wanna read more. Nice hook!

  13. Kathleen Grieve

    April 5, 2013 at 7:17 am

    Ha ha. Sounds like an invite to me. Lol. Wonder if she is a bit over her head.

  14. Sherry Gloag

    April 6, 2013 at 9:20 pm

    You caught my interest.