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Mid Week Tease: …she probably could have stripped naked and walked past their table… #MWTease

mid-week-tease-buttonHi everyone,

Welcome back to Mid Week Tease! Here’s another tease from my new novel, Hiding in Plain Sight. I’m sorry I didn’t post last week, but I’ve been on some really tight deadlines and things have been manic!

Hiding in Plain SightShe watched the group, careful not to seem as though she was staring. She wasn’t yet ready to gain their attention. It was unlikely, she quickly realised. They were so absorbed in their own little bubble that she probably could have stripped naked and walked past their table and they wouldn’t have noticed.

With happy guests and word of mouth on her mind, she came to the conclusion that, although the gang was happy, there were plenty of other people in the bar that weren’t. The more champagne the group quaffed, the more their volume increased. And with that volume increase came plentiful sighs and glares from the bar’s other patrons. But, in their bubble as they were, they didn’t notice.

Mallory smirked as she watched one angry-looking man start to get up from his chair, only to be stopped by the woman he was with, with a hand on his arm and a shake of her head. Mallory didn’t blame her. This hotel might be the most expensive and exclusive in the Netherlands, but it didn’t mean drunken guests wouldn’t turn nasty or even violent if confronted. Really, management should be getting involved at this point. Maybe she could hurry things along in that department and see if it helped her cause any.

Just then, the waiter returned with her drink. “One Manhattan, madam,” he said, placing it on the table with a flourish.

“Great. Thank you.” She deliberately glanced over at the group, then back at the waiter, her eyes wide and innocent. Quietly, she said, “I don’t mean to make a fuss, but would it be possible for something to be done about those people? They’re totally ruining the ambiance in here. Not what you’d expect from such an establishment.”

The waiter—she peeked at his name badge; Erasmus—gave a tight smile. “It is already in hand, madam. We are working to rectify the situation with the absolute minimum of fuss. However, as an apology and gesture of our deep regret, your drink is free of charge. I hope it is to your satisfaction.”

Get your copy of Hiding in Plain Sight here: https://lucyfelthouse.co.uk/published-works/hiding-in-plain-sight/

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10 Responses to "Mid Week Tease: …she probably could have stripped naked and walked past their table… #MWTease"

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  1. Adriana Kraft (@AdrianaKraft)

    September 6, 2017 at 2:28 pm

    Oh, well done! Loving this story!

  2. mhsusannematthews

    September 6, 2017 at 3:36 pm

    Great tease. Well done.

  3. Angelica Dawson

    September 6, 2017 at 5:16 pm

    Wonder what their plan is…

    • Lucy Felthouse

      September 6, 2017 at 5:53 pm

      You’ll have to wait and see… 😉

  4. dorisoconnor

    September 6, 2017 at 8:15 pm

    Fab tease 🙂

  5. cpmandara

    September 6, 2017 at 10:10 pm

    A free drink? Don’t mind if I do 😉 Great teaser!!

  6. nicolacameronwrites

    September 7, 2017 at 3:42 am

    Interesting. Wonder what exactly is going on here. Great tease, Lucy!

  7. Lea Bronsen

    September 7, 2017 at 2:27 pm

    I love the way he replies… 🙂